Something Important I Learned About Kindergarten After Kindergarten

http://offwithourheads.blogspot.com/2010/07/fyi-something-important-i-learned-about.html?m=1

The Dry Land

Please read this story. I will be grateful for help shortening it and routing out the fat and making it clear.

http://offwithourheads.blogspot.com/2015/06/the-dry-land.html?m=1

Thank you!